Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

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 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

WWW-
  • Well rehearsed
  • Courage, went first
  • Confident+clear
  • Excellent and engaging title (alliteration)
  • Media language good analysis of mise-en-scene 
  • industry: Chadha
  • Female protagonist
  • Narrative structure, flashback
  • original idea
  • slides are well presented
  • industry links-spotify,sound cloud
  • audience pleasures-identification-psychographics
EBI-
  • Clearer sense of narrative?
  • include cinematography/genre conventions
  • more theories
  • media terminology
  • non- linear narrative
concept-4
media lang-3
media reps-3
audience-3
convergence-4
presentation-4

TOTAL:21/30

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW
  • Nicely designed slides
  • clear links to industry
  • unique concept
  • considered the age rating whilst plotting
  • target audience well established
EBI
  • Lack of theorists
  • too nervous whilst presenting
  • gave up on one of the slides


3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I will have to update my statement of intent as you have helped me point out some things that are missing as well as the fact i am coming up with minor changes to the show that i think can make it better.my concept in itself i think and others agree is good and offers enough of what is needed but of course there's always room for improvement. To ensure my drama was suitable for the age rating given, i looked over what was and wasn't allowed and made sure to consider these factors when planning my story.

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